Alpha Zero
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Alpha Zero by Arthur Stone | Audiobook Review

Part of Alpha LitRPG #1

By Arthur Stone

Narrated by Eric Jason Martin

🎧 14 hours and 13 minutes 📘 Podium Audio 📅 December 7, 2021 🌐 English

About This Audiobook

I should not exist. All children like me are stillborn, or die in infancy. Those who cannot grow stronger, die.

No empty child has ever reached a year of age, yet I am now 13. It has been a long and miserable 13 years, where the best I can manage to do is walk with difficulty. Sometimes, I cannot even manage that.

My clan has paid dearly for every minute of my life, and money is not so easy to obtain here at the edge of civilization. Perhaps I might have lived in this state for many years; a cripple, strong in mind but feeble in body. But when some unexpected guests come to our estate, everything changes. I will die at last - or learn to survive on my own.

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If you go looking for the protagonist's name in this audiobook's description, you will not find it. The whole blurb is spoken by him and never identifies him: I should not exist, all children like me are stillborn or die in infancy, no empty child has ever reached a year of age, yet I am now thirteen. A voice with no name, a condition with no diagnosis, and a clan that has paid dearly for every minute of a life nobody expected to continue. The name Ged surfaces only once, buried in a five-star response, alongside a place called Rock that the copy never mentions. Listeners meet a stranger and stay with him for fourteen hours.

What We Made of It

Where Arthur Stone starts is the interesting part. Thirteen years in a body that can barely walk, and on the good days barely that; strong in mind and feeble in body, in the narrator's own words, on a world where anyone who cannot grow stronger simply dies. That is a bleak place to begin a progression fantasy, and it sets up the genre's central pleasure by inverting it. The usual power fantasy starts at zero and climbs. This one starts below zero, with a family already ruined by the cost of keeping him alive. Debt and obligation are the real starting stats here, and the book is unusually clear-eyed about what a dependent child costs the people around him.

The turn comes when unexpected guests arrive at the estate, and the reviews agree on where the book goes from there. Monster and bandit attacks, bullies put in their place, light crafting, rafting, fishing dangerous enough that the fish would happily take a hand off. One reader describes the opening as awkward, a three-star beginning that finished as a five, and another calls the origin sequence hand-wavy and brusque before conceding that the pace settles quickly. Both then read on, and that is the more useful signal. A rough first hour that converts skeptics by the last one is a common shape for a self-published debut, and this column documents it twice.

What Makes Alpha Zero Worth Hearing

A fourteen-hour first-person narration is a specific commitment, and Eric Jason Martin is credited to carry all of it. Podium Audio released it in December 2021. The first-person frame is the right shape for this material: the narrator is an outsider inside his own household, and hearing every judgment about him filtered through his own account is more effective than a neutral third person would be. One reader singles out the protagonist as reasonably intelligent for the genre, with a habit of leaping before looking. That is faint praise on its face and a real distinction in practice, since the genre is not short of protagonists who simply win.

That leads to the counterintuitive case for this book in audio. Two responses complain that the system mechanics get explained and then re-explained, which reads as padding on a page. In a recording it works the other way round. A listener cannot flip back to a table or reread a paragraph on how leveling and evolution operate, so a narrator restating the rules an hour later is doing something genuinely useful. What irritates a reader can rescue a listener, the clearest example in this catalog of a flaw changing sign when the format changes.

What Might Not Land

What these readers complain about most is the mechanics themselves, not the story around them. Alphas and Omegas needed a clearer explanation, one four-star response says, and the sense that the author kept re-explaining them suggests the author knew it. Another four-star entry admits to skipping over the passages detailing how leveling and evolution work while still enjoying the world building and the characters underneath. If the numbers are what you come to LitRPG for, this system will frustrate you before it satisfies you. The world building and the characters are what the same readers keep defending, and that is where the book's strength actually sits.

Listeners get one accidental benefit from the format. The first entry on this listing opens by flagging grammatical errors and misplaced words in the text, a complaint that simply evaporates in a recording, since a performer reading a sentence aloud repairs most of what a copy editor would have caught. That is a genuine advantage of buying this one as audio, and it is a reminder of how much of a self-published debut a good narrator quietly absorbs.

Nothing in the description supports the framing two readers use for the book. One calls the plot normal isekai fare with a revenge device attached; another says the appeal is the reincarnated-in-a-fantasy-world genre. The blurb mentions no other world, no previous life and no reincarnation at all. Either the copy is withholding the premise or the readers are importing it from elsewhere, and a buyer choosing on the description alone will get a different book from the one the reviews describe. Either way, the gap is worth knowing about first.

The Right Listener for Alpha Zero

Two kinds of listener will do well here. The first is anyone who wants progression fantasy with an unusually grim floor, where the climb costs something because the starting point is genuine helplessness. The second is anyone who has given up on LitRPG in print for exactly the reason the column names, since a narrator carrying the system exposition is a gentler introduction than a page of tables.

For the teen and young adult shelf this listing chose, a caution. The premise is a child who has been expected to die since birth, whose family has been impoverished by the effort of preventing it, and who is described in the copy as a cripple. Nothing about that is gratuitous, but it is a heavier opening than the shelf suggests, and the bullying and bandit violence that follow are not softened.

Once you are past the introduction, the book settles into something dependable: fourteen hours of crafting, fighting and steady advancement with a protagonist worth spending time with. The reservations here are consistent and narrow, all of them aimed at the machinery and none at the story. Anyone weighing it should decide how much tolerance they have for rules being read aloud, because that is where every reservation on this page eventually points. Stat-block fatigue is the only real risk this recording carries.

Before You Press Play

  • Read by: Eric Jason Martin is the sole credit on a first-person LitRPG heavy with system exposition.
  • At its heart: Progression fantasy, disability and survival, clan obligation, crafting and leveling.
  • Vibe: Grim at the start, steadily brightening.
  • Short version: A bleaker opening than the genre usually risks, undercut by a rules system nobody found clear.

How well do the LitRPG mechanics translate to this audiobook?

Awkwardly on the page and better in the ear. Two responses call the system convoluted and note the author explaining it repeatedly, which reads as padding in print. A listener cannot flip back to a table, so those restatements become helpful. One reader admits to skimming the leveling passages entirely.

Is this suitable for the teen category it is filed under?

With a caveat. The setup involves a disabled child expected to die since birth, a clan impoverished by keeping him alive, and later bullying, bandit attacks and monsters. None of it is gratuitous, and older teens will manage, but the opening is considerably darker than the shelving implies.

Must you know LitRPG conventions to follow this audiobook?

No, though two readers frame it using genre shorthand the description never uses, calling it isekai and reincarnation fare. If those terms mean nothing to you, the story still works as a survival and crafting adventure. Expect stat sheets, leveling and evolution mechanics read aloud in full.

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What Listeners Are Saying

★★★★★

An awkward beginning for a fantastic read and...

Hopefully even better series.Well there are a few grammatical errors and misplaced words the story started out as a three-star and ended up a five. I say three star because the beginning parts of this first person epic fantasy adventure lit RPG was awkward to say the least. When you...

- Steven M. Brown
★★★★☆

Complicated system mechanics, but a good underlying story.

I enjoyed this book. However, there were some small things that kept it from getting a 5th star.First is the system mechanics used. They seemed overly complicated, which was apparent in the way the author was consistently explaining - and re-explaining - the system mechanics for the reader. Well, either...

- Jennifer C.
★★★★★

Alpha Zero

I enjoyed reading Alpha Zero. I am a fan of the LitRPG and the reincarnated in a fantasy world genres. So Alpha Zero starts off on good footing for me. Ged's adventures on Rock range from surviving monster & bandit attacks to putting bullies in their place, light crafting, rafting,...

- Last Redherin
★★★★★

Excellent start for a series.

Not perfect but still quite enjoyable story with a good foundation for later books.Plot is normal isekai fare with a revenge mcguffin. The intro left me a bit confused as the origin story is rather hand-wavy and brusque, but soon settles into a good pace with much better exposition.I'm rather...

- Kindle Customer
★★★★☆

interesting

I liked this book. The “game mechanics” were a little convoluted for my taste, but the storyline was interesting and unique. The writing was good, but 4 stars because I did find myself skimming over the parts of it that covered (in detail) how leveling and the mechanics of evolution...

- Valerie

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Alexandra Reed

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